Flutter-and-Bloc-Interactions-Overview.md

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 # Await
 
 In the Repository, the **await** keyword is used to force the caller to wait for the function to complete and ensures that our response will get the data that it has requested from the server. 
-Below is code from the login repository that takes in a Login Request, encodes it as JSON and then sends a POST request to the server, awaiting a response from the server that confirms whether the password from the Login Request matches the password associated with that player in the Database. If it does, the response will be successful and the player will be logged in.
+Below is code from the login repository that takes in a Login Request, encodes it as JSON and then sends a POST request to the server, awaiting a response from the server that confirms whether the password from the Login Request matches the password associated with that player in the Database. If it does, the response will be successful and the player will be logged in, changing the display from the Login page to the main landing page.
 ```dart
 Future<LoginWithCredentialsResponse> loginPlayer(LoginWithCredentialsRequest request) async
   {
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ Future<LoginWithCredentialsResponse> loginPlayer(LoginWithCredentialsRequest req
 ```
 
 
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+# Example
 
 As an example, the following code requests information about the majors and crews when creating a player:
 ```dart